Improve an essay draft with clear feedback

Improve my essay draft with feedback.

Brief/question: [paste]
Draft: [paste]
Level: [GCSE / A-level / uni]
Mark scheme notes: [optional]

Ask me up to 3 short questions first if anything important is missing. Wait for my answers.

Then:
1. Strengths and gaps against the brief.
2. Top five revision priorities.
3. Example rewrites of at most two short paragraphs as models.
4. A checklist before I submit.
5. Reminder: submitting AI-written work may break school/uni rules — I must write the final version.

Only use what I've told you, leave blanks for anything I haven't given, and don't invent facts, steps or official URLs you're not sure of. UK English.

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